User talk:GeorginaLW/sandbox

PEER ASSESSMENT
Hello! Great article so far! I'd like to start by saying that I really liked the way you broke down the sub-headings of the article. I think the points you are choosing to cover are well chosen. I especially like the sub-heading of legacy the information that you included there. I do think that a few more citation should be added throughout the article. I realize how difficult it is to find books covering some of these historic figures- as I have a tough topic myself. Although I enjoy the expression added into the article, I think that saying things such as "more than abundant" and "irrevocably alter this delicate balance" takes away from the knowledgable and factual-ness of Wiki articles...if that makes sense. It also helps stay away from personal bias. I think that a little more information regarding the "difficult transition from hunter and warrior to farmer" mentioned in the lead would be great. I think the article is doing great so far and I look forward to reading it when it is complete.