User talk:Gerelage

George Ortiz
Hi, thanks for message. I deleted your article because  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  18:09, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
 * it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. It is now Wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references, or they will be deleted. Although you gave sources, they were all off-line sources and difficult to verify. If he is genuinely notable, you'd expect there to be something on the Internet. Since your refs were just a list at the end, instead of placed in-line, it was also unclear what facts each was supporting even if the sources had been more transparent.
 * It was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: a humanist... one of the most important collection... awoke his passion... world re-known... vast period... world masterpieces... Contrary to a number of collectors, who chose to remain in the shadows... forcefully defended... 


 * If you want a copy of the deleted text to work on in a sandbox, let me know  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  18:10, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for your reply. Yes please do place the deleted text in a sandbox so that I may work on it further.