User talk:Gf6f3/Sugar baby/Kailynhill721 Peer Review

Peer Review
Lead: This could be more concise, also needs to overview the sections later discussed.

Tone/Balance: The articles makes it seem as if young women are the main people who participate in sugar dating even though they make the claim that it's not, the tone does not necessarily reflect that.

The article in general just doesn't have a whole lot of relevant information, I think there's a lot that can be added to it.

Kailynhill721 (talk) 18:45, 6 October 2022 (UTC)