User talk:Ggfields95/sandbox

Feedback
Preliminary sources? Michelev (talk) 20:23, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Feedback on 2nd draft
Michelev (talk) 18:04, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Italics added to examples of text that needs cleaning up for clarity or informality. Just a few instances marked - there are more.
 * Good sources but missing coding for in-line citations.
 * Address peer-review comments.