User talk:Ghalmars/sandbox

Hi Ghalmar, First off, I'd like to say that is really a great article. You do a great job of summarizing what your topic is in reference to right off the bat. Furthermore, you come to a sound conclusion by applying the discussion of the concept to the formation of gender as a social construction. My only recommendation to you would be diversify your types of sources. Perhaps include a text book source or two aside from the academic scholars. It might also help to make the article slightly more informal since Wikipedia is aimed at a very general audience.