User talk:Ghbutler/sandbox

Not that I know of, but plz don't respond to this as i'm printing everything and sending it in the next 5 minutes. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 03:28, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

PHEW haha thanks, are we presenting this in class?? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Junkim91 (talk • contribs) 02:57, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Ok settle down spaz I got it XD NO MORE EDITS WE ARE DONE

WAIIIIITT I JUST ADDED AN INFOBOX SEND THE ONE WITH THE INFOBOX I JUST TRIED CALLING YOU AGHHGHGHGH Junkim91 (talk) 02:45, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Alright, no more edits, I'll send it to the T.A. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 02:31, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Innesa.i (talk) 02:12, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

I think it's completed. - BriCash (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 01:55, 29 March 2012 (UTC).

Added an electric telegraph picture, anybody else got anything to add?

I've added more info to Journalists, maybe some more pics to enhance the feel of that section? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 23:26, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

BTW guys, try to get all your revisions done by 11:30pm cause that's when I'm going to print everything off and sent it to our T.A. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 22:33, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hi Brina, I'm glad you improved the flow of the article. Great editing. Innesa.i (talk) 18:05, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Picture added — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 17:00, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Could you put a picture up of the New York Sun? - BriCash (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 16:11, 28 March 2012 (UTC).

Alright good, for now, I'm gonna try to find some good pictures to add to the journalist section.

I'll send Jun an email on our behalf to see what's going on with him. I just erased some information that was stated twice. - BriCash (talk)   —Preceding undated comment added 15:38, 28 March 2012 (UTC).

Has anybody heard from Jun? If he doesn't od naything by tonight, I'll send an e-mail to the T.A. like the prof told us to. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 15:28, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

I just put a few paragraphs together. I tried to organize the introduction by putting the information in chronological order. BriCash (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:26, 28 March 2012 (UTC).

Hey. I just contributed to the introduction and edited the flow a bit. I hope you don't mind Inna. As well, how long is it suppose to be? I thought it was suppose to be about a paragraph? Don't quote me though. Could someone try and find out so that we can adjust our length if necessary? By the way, I think we are doing a good job so far! :) BriCash (talk)

Okay, we may need more info on the new business model that appeared because of increased newspaper circulation, wider audiences, and more expensive advertising. I think it is important to cover the commercial side of the penny press. Innesa.i (talk) 06:26, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Also, found a few points on readability of the penny papers. Innesa.i (talk) 06:26, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Slightly changed the intro and added something about the use of the telegraph. Innesa.i (talk) 05:40, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

I added an introduction to the Journalist section and wrote one paragraph about human interest stories. Innesa.i (talk) 05:06, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I have added to the intro, the journalist section, and some parts of the history section. I have also added a picture to the history section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 15:41, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Guys.......anybody going to help me edit or am I by myself here? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 15:20, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

added a section about the new york times and added a paragraph to the journalists section.....where are you guys, I need some help please. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 18:28, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

more editing being done by me — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 18:28, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

ok group so here's the page, I've started making some edits — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ghbutler (talk • contribs) 18:28, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys, sorry about the late replies, I'm going through the article right now. At the start of the first paragraph it gives some general historical background regarding the penny press, shouldn't that be at the history section? Junkim91 (talk) 21:58, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Added some information regarding journalists and their focus at the end of par. 1 Junkim91 (talk) 22:04, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Edited the start of par. 2 and merged the standalone sentence after it into the second sentence, read through the change and if its not at a satisfactory level I can change it. Junkim91 (talk) 22:32, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Trying to add some photos like the Sun etc., help!! Junkim91 (talk) 23:06, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Did some editing for flow and consistency through some sentences. Anyone still checking this page? Junkim91 (talk) 01:43, 29 March 2012 (UTC)