User talk:Ghettoguy

Problems with your edits
In this edit, you randomly placed a statement in the References section instead of the body of the article. Also, the comment is an unsourced analysis of the film. In this edit, you added unsourced speculation about a possible upcoming film, in violation of WP:CRYSTAL. And such details do not belong in the lead; see WP:LEAD. In this edit you made another randomly placed statement in the Notes section instead of the body of the article. The sentence also has poor grammar and spelling. In this edit you inexplicably created a low level subheading, and then added a random comment that should go in the body of the article. In this edit you (again inexplicably) changed a subheading into a boxed sentence. Please click and read all of the information in the blue links in the Welcome message above. Let me also suggest that you seek adoption by an experienced user to help you with your writing skills; go to Adopt-a-User/Adoptee's Area. Also, when you edit, use the preview button ("Show preview", to the right of "Save page") before saving so that you can see your errors before they are saved. That avoids clogging up the edit history with 10 edits that can be done in one edit. Thank you. Happy editing! Ward3001 (talk) 14:02, 2 September 2008 (UTC)