User talk:Ghs1839

Georgia Historical Society edit
Hi, I noticed you changed the lead paragraph on the Georgia Historical Society. Since you seem to be familiar with the organization, I'd like to request your help in making that lead paragraph more encyclopedic in nature. In my opinion, saying it "tells the story of Georgia" is too vague. It needs to be written such that someone not familiar with Georgia, the US and or historical societies will know exactly what the organization is and does (briefly) in the first sentence. Check out the section Lead section from the Manual of Style for more detail about the lead paragraph in Wikipedia articles. I'll be glad to help. Also if you have access to sources for any information you add, plesae do add those refernces as it will improve the article greatly. --Roswell native 16:31, 21 February 2007 (UTC)