User talk:Gia22017

May 2014
Hello, I'm Wtmitchell. I wanted to let you know that I undid one of your recent contributions, such as the one you made with this edit to Christian Dior, because it didn’t appear constructive to me. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Wtmitchell (talk) (earlier Boracay Bill) 02:50, 6 May 2014 (UTC)

Regarding your edit to Hermes: per MOS:CAPS, the word "god" is capitalized when used as a proper noun, but not as a common noun. Regarding your other edits: please, pay, attention, to, where, you, put, commas. And, periods. Your edits included a lot of comma splices and some period placement I can't begin to make sense out of. This edit changed
 * "Three years later, after the death of Dior's mother and brother and a financial disaster in the family’s fertilizer business, during the Great Depression, that resulted in his father losing control of Dior Frères, the gallery had to be closed."

...into...
 * "Three years later, after the death of Dior's mother and brother and a financial disaster in the family’s fertilizer business. During the Great Depression, that resulted in his father losing control of Dior Frères, the gallery had to be closed."

...causing serious sentence fragmentation. The first sentence of second version doesn't explain what happened after all the bad stuff happened. The second sentence of the second version doesn't explain what resulted in Dior's father losing control of the gallery. Perhaps you should leave grammar fixes to others. Ian.thomson (talk) 02:57, 6 May 2014 (UTC)