User talk:Gibso.danny/sandbox

Hello! I've given your wiki a first time run through and it looks REALLY good. You've found a lot of really good information and formatted and organized well. I did notice, particularly in the symptoms section, that there is a lot of advanced language, a lot has been linked but if some of that can be reduced it will be more beneficial to a less educated reader.

Alexander Johnson

Hi D. Gibson!

Crouzon syndrome is interesting! Why did you choose this? Interested in Dental School? So overall your Wiki looks quite complete. Some critiques I have are to cite and link the references more in the signs and symptoms section in case readers would like to refer back to the articles. Also for psittichorhina -- you may want to find an outside link for it since there is not Wiki link connected to it.

What is missing is perhaps some information on what studies are being performed today if there are any recent research going on and possible mechanism? In the end, your article looks nice, just add some more citations in case readers would like to go back to the original article/journal articles and add current research if you can.

I hope this helps!

Thanks!

Cyu2 (talk) 13:57, 10 November 2015 (UTC)Cheryl

Sweiner02 (talk) 22:54, 12 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Right now this is just a copy of the page that already exists. I can't give you much credit for it. You need recent research and mechanisms, more information on causes, more explanation of how it's diagnosed.