User talk:Gil6362/Big cat/Yarelvaldez Peer Review

Hi Gil,

I found your choice of article very interesting!! I am not sure if your research topic revolves around big cats but the article included a wide variety of references. However, I think the sections that described the subject were a bit broad. For example, the paragraph that discussed roaring appeared to be irrelevant as it was a very short paragraph. If possible I would attempt in finding another article that introduces big cats with more details. This would be the case again if your research topic is about big cats. Lastly, I enjoyed the images that were attached to the article!! I hope to hear back from you soon!

-Yarel