User talk:Gillianmaullon

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Hello, Gillianmaullon, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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WP:NPOV
Hello. For edits to Applications of artificial intelligence, please avoid using vague and hypothetical language. The last thing the article needs is more ambiguous hype. Please also avoid business jargon and buzzwords. The goal of the article isn't to advocate for AI, nor to list potential or hypothetical use cases. Make sure that your additions are actually going to help disinterested readers understand the topic.

To provide some more detail on the problem, sentences like For example, the development of the Internet of Things has changed the way technology can be used for water management of crops. are not informative. Filler-language like this only makes the article more difficult to read while also making the article read more like a press release.

Further, please make sure that every source you cite is reliable and proportionally summarized. SemanticScholar.org is poor for this, to put it mildly. You cited a journal called Engineering, Technology & Applied Science Research. Is that journal reliable? I don't know, but it doesn't necessarily look like it for a few reasons, and citing a journal without any context makes it very hard for readers to assess. Grayfell (talk) 00:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)