User talk:Ginseng777/sandbox

Jess

This topic sounds fine, I think. Do you know just where you will add this info? I doesn't sound like its own page. Maybe an expansion of an already existing green tea page? You should suggest this renovation on the talk page - see if anyone has any comments - before plowing ahead. Are there recent reviews to get you started? TomHaffie (talk) 01:00, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Jess

OK, a good start. You should add links to other WP pages as appropriate. Try to tighten up the writing to make it as specific to your topic as possible. Maybe have a colleague not familiar with the topic read it over for clarity.

Grade 2/2  TomHaffie (talk) 00:36, 11 November 2014 (UTC)