User talk:Giraffacamelopardalis

September 2014
Hello, I'm Donner60. I wanted to let you know that I undid one of your recent contributions, such as the one you made with this edit to Emphasis (typography), because it didn’t appear constructive to me. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Donner60 (talk) 02:33, 16 September 2014 (UTC)

Article draft
Nice start with the sandbox article you have been working on. Please don't forget to add wikilinks to other articles, especially when you use refer to something that the average person might not be aware of. Links like that provide more information to many readers (if they want to know more). Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:14, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Qasr Ibrim
I edited some of the botanical terminology in the paragraph you've added to Qasr Ibrim. Looks good! Although I would make sure to note why the sorghum information is important - what does it tell us about the origins of agriculture in Africa? You may want to look at a book such as The Exploitation of Plant Resources in Ancient Africa edited by van der Veen. Ninafundisha (talk) 16:50, 27 October 2014 (UTC)