User talk:Girasol10002/sandbox

peer review feedback
the articles Early Life and Education section has significantly been improved with new information.

new information about films have been added to page. Very detailed descriptions of films.

awards and recognition information have been added to page.

the structure and flow of information is superior. very well written and sentences link.

information is written in a non-biased way. it is neutral.

sources are credible and well balanced. journal articles from credible databases are used.

overall, contributions done by student editor has vastly improved the page.

The introduction to the wikipedia page should be stronger. More prominent/relevant information should be displayed in the introduction.

Perhaps more information could be added to the "Early life and Education" section. It is a little bit small compared to the Career section. More information could be added to distribute the weight of the article more evenly.

A "Legacy" section would be useful for this article to enhance it.

All in all, information is accurate and detailed.

Mintandlavender (talk) 15:59, 19 October 2018 (UTC)MintandLavender