User talk:Giron-a-mo/Neritona granosa/Ncorpuz4 Peer Review

Giron-a-mo Neritona gransoa Peer Review - Bnolan76445

 * 1) What impressed me about this article was how much information was provided. I learned a lot about this species and enjoyed reading every section. This article was also well organized and finding specific information is not hard, everything is spread out and not crowded.
 * 2) I think most of the information is very relevant and many people may learn something new from this article. One thing that confused me was the section that says “Description”. I think your whole article is a description on your species that’s split in different categories so you may wanna take that section out.
 * 3) All sources are informative and are in every sentence, as well as having a reference page at the bottom.
 * 4) Again the only change I suggest is taking out the description section
 * 5) You may want to add some more information although I think you added a lot and relevant information.
 * 6) Need a closing paragraph

Bnolan76445 (talk) 01:05, 25 October 2023 (UTC)