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Article Evaluation
Crime of Apartheid

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Everything in my article directly correlated with the idea of apartheid from the definitions to the examples from the countries that had had this racial division.

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? The information cannot necessarily be out of date, because it is giving examples of apartheid and much of it happened in the past. Personally, I believe there are more countries that face domination by one race then the examples given, but some how those are the only ones recognized. Therefore I believe my article was lacking some information and could have been more detailed than giving a broader outlook on the idea of apartheid. However, on the contrary the article did give more than South Africa as an example which is the main country associated with Apartheid.

What else could be improved? I think part of the article was a little bias for some of the countries such as Israel was more one sided presepective than highlighting the Palestinians.

Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? The links in the article are funcitonal and the claims do support the article. Each of the facts referenced is supported with a reliable source with the exception of the "Israel and the Apartheid Slander" by the New York times writer that was cited by the author.

What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? Behind the scenes of this article there was not a ton of conversation on this article, the section that generated the most conversation was the ICC disclaimer and the Israel example.

How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? This article is related directly to race relations and how other countries treat the two different "races" also how this was started from an early time period. This article is not part WikiProject Discrimination, WikiProject Human rights, and WikiProject South Africa.

How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? We have not yet spoken about this topic in class, but based on the conversations generated in the last class I believe that our class will be in strong support of those marginalized in a society. I do look forward to touching on this subject in class and talking about other places than South Africa. --Gitikamaheshwari (talk) 05:55, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Feedback
Very thorough review and well done thinking deeply about what evidence and views are represented in the article. This evaluation should be located in your sandbox and this is your Talk page. Let me know if you need any navigational help. - Kquave (talk) 19:16, 11 September 2018 (UTC)

Yazidi Genocide by ISIL
ARTICLE: Yazidi Genoicde- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Genocide_of_Yazidis_by_ISIL

Intro: The Yazidi, a group who have been the target of a massacre, rape, and sex slavery by ISIL. The Yazidi group is facing forcible conversion to Islam, or ISIS members and their supporters will kill them. The ISIS fighters have forced the relocation of many Yazidis, due to their destruction of temples and villages.

Background: The Yazidis have been victims to constant oppression of their fundamental human rights, due to terrorist organizations that want them to change their values. The terrorist began killing the Yazidi. The effects of the genocide have impacted other communities of Yazidis, especially in Germany. The UN recognized the genocide as ongoing. However, the international community still must recognize the detrimental effects of the genocide. While some countries may choose to overlook the idea of the genocide, the UN writes that the atrocities need to be understood and the international community needs to bring the killings to an end. While the information is readily available and evidence is displayed from the attacks like the Sinjar mountain massacre.https://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/middle-east/syria-yazidis-isis-islam-conversion-afrin-persecution-kurdish-a8310696.html However, Turkish forces have been backing the Jihadist of ISIL and displacing the Yazidi from their original villages to the city of Afrin. Furthermore, the controversy lingers after the 2014 attack on Mount Sinjar; the Turkish forces attacked the Yazidi tribe from above. Additionally, their aid was only given after many nations called out their actions that their slow movement. https://news.un.org/en/story/2017/08/562772-isils-genocide-against-yazidis-ongoing-un-rights-panel-says-calling

While some countries may choose to overlook the idea of the genocide, the UN writes that the atrocities need to be understood and the international community needs to bring the killings to an end.

International Response Recently, the Security Council team has enforced the idea of a new accountability team that will collect evidence of the international crimes committed by the Islamic State. However, the international community has not been in full support of this idea, because it can sometimes oversee the crimes that other armed groups are involved in

21:44, 21 October 2018 (UTC)Gitikamaheshwari (talk)

Varun's Peer Review
The language in the background section feels a bit biased, but otherwise, everything sounds good. Maybe try to reword the first section, focusing more on what type of oppression they are facing. The new citations are incorporated well. Varunko (talk) 07:48, 2 November 2018 (UTC) Varun Oberoi