User talk:Giulio Camillo

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Hello, Giulio Camillo, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! --Bejnar (talk) 22:58, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
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In your edits of 10 February 2010 to the Thomas Joshua Cooper article, you converted "He is married to Catherine Alice Mooney and together have had two daughters," to "He is fortunate to be married to the wonderful Catherine Alice Mooney and together they have had two beautiful daughters,". This may well be true, but (1) the addition of such words detracts from the encyclopedic tone of the Wikipedia, (2) those words are unsupported in reliable secondary sources, (3) such additions detract from the neutral point of view that as editors we strive to maintain. In addition they smack of original research. Please refrain from these types of edits. --Bejnar (talk) 23:04, 2 March 2010 (UTC)