User talk:Givens.87

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (October 1)
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Origamiteⓣⓒ 11:56, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

Human brain evolution
Rather than adding your draft to the human evolution article you might consider adding to the Evolution of the brain article or the evolution section of the human brain article. A few other pointers Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:33, 17 November 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) Bear in mind that Wikipedia articles are integrated into a whole. For article sections, this means the article itself - there's no need to explain or repeat things that a reader should have encountered higher up the page. They're also connected to other articles by wikilinks - if there's some term or concept that the average reader may not be familiar with, provide a link to the article where they can learn more.
 * 2) Don't forget to break your text up into paragraphs and use inline citations to link to your references.

Evolution of the brain
Thanks for your additions to the Evolution of the brain article. I noticed that you did not add many wikilinks to other articles. Links like that are useful for readers, since they allow them to learn more about topics they may not be familiar with. It would be helpful if you could add links to terms like these. Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:43, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Givens.87/sandbox


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 12:21, 13 April 2015 (UTC)