User talk:Gjbarclay

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British anti-invasion preparations of World War II
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Battle of George Square
In this edit you changed
 * "Accounts differ on what initiated the violence on the day, but police testimony at the following trials records that the police baton charged the striking workers at 12:20."

to
 * "The failure of the tram workers to join the strike, and paralysed the city, had been a source of growing tension in the preceding days. Some of the strikers tried to stop the tram traffic in the Square. Attempts by the police led to a series of baton charges and growing violence."

That last sentence looks quite incomplete
 * "Attempts by the police led to a series of baton charges and growing violence."

Now that I look again, the first sentence looks very odd, too. Can you remember your intentions and fix this paragraph? Shenme (talk) 02:03, 31 January 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing these issues out. I have re-edited.