User talk:Gjone34/sandbox

The Lead
You were supposed to post the lead in the sandbox for review. Anyway, the lead is a good start. You need to change "outwear" to "outerwear" and "Snowboards" to "Snowboarding" in the second sentence. And what is a Four Square team? Maybe you should simply say that forum sponsors a team of competitors. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:53, 1 November 2015 (UTC)