User talk:Gkyoungren/Digital media use and mental health

G - Nice evaluation of the article and what was missing from the article. Additionally the research you conducted to improve the article was solid. Good work! DrTraceyHayes (talk) 20:23, 26 February 2020 (UTC)

Gretchen, I apologize for the delay - I was having trouble finding your article review because it was not in the sandbox link I was clicking. Anyway - I thought your review of the article "Digital media use and mental health" was very thorough and you made some great additions. The TED talk is a perfect addition and your summary of the TED talk is very neutral and well done. The statistic on the screen time is an impactful addition and the article you found to add information under the related phenomena section is excellent. This is an exciting topic and I am sure one that will be evolving more as time goes on and we are able to learn more about the connection between digital media use and mental health. I am certainly very interested to see where research on this topic will lead us. Overall, great work. I think your additions are on point and I do not have any further suggestions Sophianhurst (talk) 22:37, 22 February 2020 (UTC)