User talk:Glassknott/sandbox

I really like the improvements you have added when compared to the page that is on Wikipedia. I only found some sentence structures that could use some editing towards the bottom of the page. There are some headers with no information that could be deleted if no information is available like the decline of Parkside--Beast3020 (talk) 04:40, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

This is a great start to this project. The page looks exactly like a wikipedia page and the information is well-sourced. There are already great spots to pull from here to put on the main page, so we can talk about that on Monday. Rather than saying "see also" Wikipedia usually says "main article" when pointing to a separate article. Other than a few place where I found typos, I really don't have that much guidance to give here. I think there are also ample opportunities to push this project forward in multiple directions. Great work. Colbuendia71 (talk) 17:16, 25 April 2019 (UTC)

Other than some minor grammatical issues, this article seems ready to move into main space. Proofread for comma errors and tense issues, and let me know if you need any help getting it moved over. Colbuendia71 (talk) 18:06, 2 May 2019 (UTC)