User talk:Glo.rriaa/Islamic feminism

Peer Review
Hi Gloria! Overall, your writing is well written and couldn't find many things to fix. Your writing follows all the checklist requirements. Some minor changes I would say to consider is perhaps adding subheads for "Challenges Faced by Muslim Women" and "Activist Efforts for Gender Equality." I feel like this would maybe make it easier for others reading this article a bit easier. Another minor change would be changing the wording a bit such as "don't" to "do not", we want to make sure the tone of the writing is formal. Also, maybe try to include the links to the articles your referencing if you could, if you can't then just disregard this. And use Grammarly, to fix the grammar errors and you should be good. Awesome job! :))

Leil4hhh (talk) 19:46, 21 March 2024 (UTC)