User talk:GloriaBurgle

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First person pronouns
While I agree with your deletion of the single-sourced reviews in this edit, your edit summary accompanying the edit indicated, among other things, "frequent use of a first person pronoun." The material you removed contained two first person pronouns: the word we ("...the world in which we live.") and the pronoun me (the "Me Too" movement). While these are both technically first person pronounce, they are not the stuff that MOS:PERSON is trying to avoid. The we refers to we, the human race, not any particular group, and the Me Too movement is a worldwide phenomenon reflecting the experience of many people. Please be careful not to be overly critical of first person pronouns where they have useful application. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:01, 18 July 2019 (UTC)