User talk:Gmoneyfrommadisonave

January 2024
Hello, I'm Discospinster. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to The Beverly Hills Hotel seemed less than neutral and has been removed. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. ... disco spinster   talk  03:49, 24 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello! I am not sure how this is not neutral... It is obvious that the iconic trademark of the BHH is not mentioned in this article and many people are questioning why. I took it upon myself to include this. Paul R. Williams himself discussed this topic, and he is the backbone of this hotel. I would love to learn from this to be more concrete in my contributions, as I feel the real history of Los Angeles lacks existence on Wikipedia. Thank you! Gmoneyfrommadisonave (talk) 18:10, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
 * It's possible to describe something as "iconic" without seeming like you are trying to advertise it. For example, adding a third-party source that describes it that way. "Hangs beautifully" and "modern inspiration" is a subjective description and not suited for an encyclopedia. ... disco spinster   talk  19:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Noted. Will re-write without subjective terms. I appreciate you taking the time. o explain this. Gmoneyfrommadisonave (talk) 15:53, 26 January 2024 (UTC)