User talk:Gmoniyee

Eng 22 Class Page
See the Eng 22 class page here: User:Eng22

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Good job!
Good job posting your intro to Wikipedia.

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 04:10, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

1st draft comments
Good start so far with the article.

Suggestions:


 * Rewrite the first sentence to read: Civil War Rifles came in many kinds.


 * Good job listing sources in your Works Cited section. In addition to the URLs (website addresses), You need to add information for each source (author [if any], title(s), date(s).

Refer to the following for overall guidance on writing the article.


 * Good_article_criteria
 * MLA citation style

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 20:06, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Keep working at it!
You need to add references to your article.

For more information about this, see the section of Wikipedia about parenthetical citation.

Also, see if you can add a picture to your article. David can help you. Or you want to try it yourself, see Picture_tutorial

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 08:06, 15 July 2008 (UTC)