User talk:Gmoore12/Collodictyon

Hey GT, I have posted a peer review of your article if you would like to check it out.

Dr. White's critique of your first draft
Article body The Collodictyon are omnivorous eukaryotic organisms that have a mix of cellular components which makes them distinctive from other orders and families. Collodictyon contain a ventral feeding groove that divides the organism longitudinally called the Sulcus. This structure is comparable to the feeding grooves in Excavata due to the fact that it also contains a supporting structure from left and right microtubular roots that line the entirety of the lips of the Sulcus. The feeding groove also forms pseudopods at the base which have a related function to pseudopods in Amoebozoa. In both Collodictyon and Amoebazoa, pseudopods are utilized in order to catch prey.

References GREAT job formatting references. 1.	Zhao, S., Burki, F., Bråte, J., Keeling, P. J., Klaveness, D., & Shalchian-Tabrizi, K. (2012). Collodictyon—An Ancient Lineage in the Tree of Eukaryotes. Molecular Biology and Evolution, 29(6), 1557–1568. https://doi.org/10.1093/molbev/mss001https://academic.oup.com/mbe/article/29/6/1557/997992 2.	Skvortzov, B. V. (1968). On a new species of the genus Collodictyon Carter, a colourless flagellata new to the Hongkong flora. 22, 451–454. 3.	Brugerolle, G. u. y., Bricheux, G., Philippe, H., & Coffe, G. (2002). Collodictyon triciliatum and Diphylleia rotans (= Aulacomonas submarina) Form a New Family of Flagellates (Collodictyonidae) with Tubular Mitochondrial Cristae that is Phylogenetically Distant from other Flagellate Groups. Protist, 153(1), 59–70.

'''Overall, your information adds a lot to the existing article, although you need to specify to what section you are adding each piece of information. Be sure to include in text citations and links to other Wikipedia sites. You need to add an image. Your peer review has some good suggestions to follow as well.''' Whiteamphipod (talk) 16:22, 22 October 2021 (UTC)