User talk:Gnels/sandbox

Peer Review (Hayley)
Hi there. It looks like you are getting your ideas organized into several paragraphs so you are off to a great start! I have never heard of mesograzers, thus this makes for a very interesting topic and I am looking forward to reading your article. Perhaps you could expand your thoughts further and break your key paragraphs down into sub-paragraphs. For example, you could include sub-paragpahs explaining the various types of defence or feeding mechanisms performed by mesograzers. This would allow you to keep your ideas flowing and organized throughout your article. In addition, a database search should be done to find reliable and credible sources on the information you will be providing in your article. Lastly, you may want to come up with a good lead paragraph to introduce mesograzers (what they are, etc.), since there is minimal information already included in the existing article. A picture or two of mesograzers would also be very visually appealing in your article:) I am looking forward to reading your final article in the future. HayleyMercer (talk) 01:55, 23 October 2017 (UTC)