User talk:Gnordby/sandbox

=Evaluations=

Spelling/Grammar
Looks great, but I would probably have said "Because of the" instead of "Because the" in the last sentence. Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:18, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Language
Language looks good. Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:18, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Organization
Well organized Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:18, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Coding
It looks good Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:19, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Validity
You might need to add more links at the end of the sentences that contain the fact to references in order to validate what you are saying. Other than that, it looks good. Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:20, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Completion
Seems complete to me. Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:22, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Relevance
It seems to me that some of what you have written is already mentioned in either the paragraph for climate in Prague's page, or the table that was provided. Like the description of Prague's summers and winters was already mentioned in the original paragraph, and the average temperatures in the table show that January is the coldest month. Other than that, it seem that you're on the right track! Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:27, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

1/29/2018 Evaluation by caleb26

 * Points: 34/40
 * Grade: 85%

Overall Thoughts
Excellent work. The climate section of any city’s wiki article is always one of the first things I reference. They are so valuable. I wish you the best of luck with finding ways to expand it.

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard. I just see a few small things that could be ironed out. In the sentence “The highest average temperature have been recorded in Prague.” I would suggest switching the “have” to “has”. In the last sentence you could possible insert “of” between “because” and “the”. You could also potentially reword the last bit to say something like “…the climate is impacted by the urban heat effect.” Very good work on everything else.

Language
Meets standard. The language used is exactly the type that I would expect to find in a Wikipedia article. Good job.

Organization
Meets standard. Everything seems to be organized logically.

Coding
Meets standard. No coding errors observed.

Validity
Nearly meets standard. The information presented seems to agree with the sources cited.

Completion
Nearly meets standard. The expansions to existing sentences and additions of other sentences all meet the criteria for the assignment. You may want to verify whether the Encyclopedia Britannica can be used as a source. I should note, I understand how hard it can be to find peer-reviewed journals on the weather of a particular city. I tried and failed with Lyon.

Relevance
Meets standard. The information presented is relevant to the sub-topic to which it is elucidating: climate.

1/29/2018 Evaluation by Bportis
Great addition(or edit?) to the Wikipedia page on Prague!
 * Grade: 'A'

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard Everything looks good except for the last sentence, just need to add "of" in "Because the city's warming effect,...".

Language
Exceeds standard Good use of a neutral language and no contractions.

Organization
Nearly Meets standard. Everything looks good, just need a heading for the climate.

Coding
Meets standard. Everything looks good here.

Validity
Meets standard. Everything looks great. Solid information to add to the page.

Completion
Nearly Meets standard. It's almost there with just a little touching up to do.

Relevance
Meets standard. No irrelevant content. Looks like a great addition(or edit?) to the Wikipedia page for Prague.

Shayla's Peer Review
Language[edit source] Almost meets Expectations. Would suggest putting a space between this sentence: "The average of yearly snow days in the winter are 140."

Organization[edit source] Does meet standard. Information is laid out fine.

Coding[edit source] Good.

Validity[edit source] Meets standard.

Completion[edit source] Almost meets standard. Would like to read what the highest recorded temperature in Prague was. Also would like to see a header above this information to clarify what the paragraph discusses in detail. Would like to see more information about this topic.

Relevance[edit source] Meets standard.

Sources[edit source] Meets standard.

Citations[edit source] Meets Expectations. Each sentence contains a citation.

References[edit source] Meets standard. A clear list is easy to find at the bottom.

Ending Notes: Nice job Gabbie! Thanks for teaching us about Prague's weather. I've had a few friends tell me about their trips there, so it makes me think back to them to see if I remember recalling any mention about the weather. Keep it up! Shaywah (talk) 18:36, 30 January 2018 (UTC)Shayla

3/19/18 Peer Review

Hi Gabbie, Spelling/Grammar- Seems good overall. Under the heading of “Administration”, I I would change the word ‘mayor’ to ‘mayors’ in the following sentence: “Mayor are directly voted into office in Verona.” In the following sentence, I would change this sentence to reduce redundancy: “They can appoint and dismiss certain officials. [19] Language- Would finish the sentence at the end of the first paragraph under the heading “Administration”. I would also reword this sentence to: “Founded in 1967, this Easter Festival was meant to be an addition to the Salzburg Festival.” I also would change the wording of this sentence to: The classic opera "The Marriage of Figaro" was written inside this very building and it is the only home of Mozart's in which is still standing today.[10] Organization- Looks solid. Coding- Good. I would remove the wik ilink to “post-war construction plan” in your last paragraph since it is highlighted in red and doesn’t exist. Would suggest adding a wiki code to “veneto region” or just “veneto”. Validity- Nearly valid. Once citations are added to each sentence in these paragraphs, it should be sound. See the citations section for more info. Completion- Nearly complete. You are on the road to a solid A in my opinion. Relevance- This information is very relevant, especially since it discusses the Salzburg Festival, that still takes place every year and is prominent to understanding their culture, from what it sounds like. Sources- You have the minimum of 20 sources, nice job! (I bet that was the most difficult part of the assignment....) Citations- Great information. However there are a lot of sentences that don’t have a proper citation under the heading “Administration”, thus I would add some, and also for this sentence: Mozarthaus Vienna, the home of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, is located in Salzburg and has become a popular museum. References- I would suggest looking into how to properly citate google translate within your edit, and whether or not it should be added to the list of references. Perhaps Professor Wright might have some suggestions. Overall Impressions- This seems nicely thought out, I liked your addition of a picture within your article. It made me feel like I was reading an actual wikipedia page, well done Gabbie! Good luck on your finals and the rest of your academic endeavors. --Shayla — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shaywah (talk • contribs) 20:19, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

3/21/2018 Evaluation by Bportis
Overall Comments Good job Gabrielle! This is a great addition to the Verona page, and with some more sources and a bit of change with the grammatical structure of the sentences this will be perfect.


 * Points: 35/40
 * Grade: 87.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard I would consider changing the first sentence to something like "Italy has a governmental constitution which allows it to be easily amended when the need arises." In the second sentence I believe you meant to use "as" instead of "at". In the fourth sentence you have "The Veneto region" twice, so getting one of those will help. Also in that same sentence I think that using "a part" instead of "apart" would work better. In the second paragraph it should say "Mayors" rather than "Mayor". In the fourth paragraph, in the second sentence, I would add an "and" before you say "in 1946". In this same paragraph you are missing a space after the period where it says "Verona", in the fourth sentence.

Language
Meets standard Overall looks good. Good encyclopedic tone and diction.

Organization
Meets standard. Good paragraphs and headers. Good job!

Coding
Nearly Meets standard. I would add links to Italy, Veneto, democratic republic, Italian Communist Party, the Christian Democratic Party, regional, provincial, municipal, and if you can find the page for Federico Sboarina that would be helpful as well.

Validity
Nearly Meets standard. Just need a few citations after sentences to prove validity. Overall looks good.

Completion
Nearly meets standard. Nearly complete. You just need to fix some grammatical, coding, and add a couple references after some of the sentences and it will be great.

Relevance
Meets standard. Everything here seems very relevant to the Administration of Verona. Good job!