User talk:Goalbox

Hi there,

I deliberately let create the content for https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flipit_NZ be created by someone else (a third party). I saw it was tagged, do you have suggestions what and how I should change it? I don't really see how it is pure promotional. But I'd like to receive feedback on how to improve. I saw for instance that RetailMeNot wasn't tagged.

Thanks in advance,

Best — Preceding unsigned comment added by JWvT19 (talk • contribs) 15:16, 16 December 2014 (UTC)


 * The first few lines, with phrases such as "exclusive deals for thousands of online stores" may sound a bit too promotional to some users. I have replaced it with the less controversial term "online promotions" for now. Nothing major, just keep in mind that you're writing an encyclopedia article, not a press release. Goalbox (talk) 14:26, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

Okay, thanks a lot for your input & help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.163.185.209 (talk) 09:16, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Deletion of Salewa page
You recently marked the Salewa page I created for deletion. I am in no way connected to the company (but have purchased something by them and was surprised there wasn't a page for them already) so it is not advertising/self-promotion. There is a lengthy German language article on Salewa and it is linked to from the Wild Country page (which is a subsidiary of Salewa). I realise I did not have a lot of information and should perhaps have marked it as a stub but I do feel it is worthy of a page. I would like to put it back and try to add more detail when I am able to. If you still feel it shouldn't be there, please could you explain why? Thanks. Devilsevilhair (talk) 19:49, 27 December 2014 (UTC)