User talk:GoatCheesePizza/Dirección Nacional de Protección de Datos Personales

Peer review by David Lu: Hi, I believe overall this is a great article and has no obvious grammar mistakes. It does a great job in detailze the contents as it is subdivided into many different sections which made it easier to read. The contents are written pretty fluently and easy to read. One problem that I found is that There seems to be no heading for in the very first paragraph which should tell us the name of the article. Besides, everything else is pretty good. (Jojo11234 (talk) 13:05, 19 March 2021 (UTC))

Hi Logan, Great job on this article! Everything was very readable, and you did a really good job maintaining the English translations for agencies and other official names, which can be kind of difficult sometimes! From what I could find, I believe that the official name for this directorate is the "National Directorate for Personal Data Protection (NDPDP)", however all of the other names look good! Also, I recommend going through the lead again and with shortening, combining, or taking out some of the lists that are redundant/repeated. Otherwise, once you finish up your translated citations and fix some of the section headings, I think you'll be good to go :) Coffeeluvr (talk)