User talk:GoatCheesePizza/Ley Orgánica de Protección de Datos Personales y garantía de los derechos digitales

Hi Logan,

In general this is a great article. The lead section is clear with a structured form. And the "structure" section has good readability especially when the information itself could be fragmentary. Language has a good flow as well since the phrasing and wordings are neutral and factual. Something I think could improve is the last section. I think currently there are too many points maybe you could collect sentences into one paragraph so it has better readability.

Hi Logan,

Good job! I think you could definitely tweak and simplify a few sentences here and there to help with readability, especially in the last section, but not a huge issue. My main advice is to just fix the heading formating and style. For example, using double quotations instead of single for applicable quotes. Just needs a bit of cleaning up, but otherwise very very solid :) Coffeeluvr (talk)