User talk:Goffe.2

Nice work!
You definitely need to add some pictures to go along with your subject headers. If there is a sign entering people into Driving Park, maybe take a picture of that and use it as your main picture for the neighborhood. You could also try to find an old map and scan it in. You could also add more to the recreation and education sections or combine the two so it looks like you have more content. You could also create a subsection under residential to put the notable residents in. Are there any other structures or landmarks? You only listed one. What other means of recreation are there? You could reference recreation in nearby neighborhoods if you struggle to find more in Driving Park. Are there any other schools? If not, what schools are the residents of Driving Park zoned for? You could also add more information and history on Eddie Rickenbacker if you felt inclined to do so. If you wanted more sections to add to your page you could include sections such as geography or demographics. Make sure that you add your references to the page. The more sources you reference the more reliable the page is and appears. Check the Architecture Library for books and other sources of information!

Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Goffe.2 (talk) 22:57, 22 October 2014 (UTC)