User talk:Gohu Torvic

Peter Eigen
Hi Gohu,

I made some minor grammar/style fixes to the lead, but left most of it alone. The phrase "initiator and leader on a number of sustained high-profile initiatives" - I don't have a problem with that phrase per se, but it's very vague. I would like to see a separate paragraph, in the lead, actually state WHICH initiatives Eigen has led or initiated. I can help you with this if you like. Regards, Benicio2020 (talk) 15:05, 26 February 2021 (UTC)