User talk:GoldenLaurel/sandbox

07:56, 4 May 2020 (UTC)Pinedoa93 : I really enjoyed the overall structure of your article. Breaking it down into 4 major headings, followed by sub-headings allows the reader to connect those sub-points to the main idea of the reading. One thing I would say from that would be to use the word "and" instead of using the back slash or forward slash.

Another thing I would add is to edit some of the longer run on sentences, mainly in the Aluminum Cans section. Also what I learned from thesis is removing extra adjective words such as "much more", just use more, sometimes less is better. I have that issue, so don't worry about it too much.

You had some few grammar issues, so double check that before submitting. I also suggest reading it aloud on my own to see if my sentences make sense. Is the "PlantBottle" heading meant to be one word or is it separate?

If you can find more information on the carbon footprint and Health Issues sections, I think that could make the article even more fascinating. Also, have their been other instances of littering issues such as the Grand Canyon?

You have a good amount of sources, so I think you're doing great with that portion of the assignment.

Overall, I found your article to be well organized, with few grammar and sentence structure mistakes that can be easily fixed. I believe it's in great shape and will result in a great article.