User talk:Goldvicecapt

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"What I've Been Looking For"
You do not give enough background in this article for a normal user of Wikipedia to understand it. A wikipedia article should either be: 1) understandable by the general public; 2) contain links to the background information required to understand the article; or 3) in the case of highly technical articles, a clear presentation of what type of expertise is required to understand your article (for example, a difficult quantum physics article might include "[article name] is an advanced topic in quantum physics" or something like that).

I'd suggest making clear where this song came from, perhaps by creating another page about the play that this is derived from. Some background infomation on the people you mention in the article would be helpful as well. Also, citing your sources for the infomration about the composers like/dislike of versions of this song would also be good. Including information about when and where this song was written and perform will allow readers to place the topic of this article in a setting.

Finally, you should endever to make this article link to at least one other article, and to have at least one other article link to this one, so that Wikipedia surfers can actually access it.

If you want, come talk to me. --Acewolf359 15:57, 11 January 2007 (UTC)