User talk:Golgo161

The statement "Like L. Ron Hubbard, Reverend Moon and other cult leaders, Osho was seen to live in ostentation and offensive opulence, while his followers might be at mere subsistence level."

IS Verbose, as it unnecessarily cites other religious leaders. It is an inarticulate and loquacious sentence. The proposed alteration

“Osho was seen by some of his observers as living in ostentation and offensive opulence, while his followers might be at mere subsistence level.”

does not alter the intention of the sentence, rather it only makes the sentence stand for itself, representing what the author is trying to say with out needless distraction from cogency. I honestly don’t understand why it was changed back to its original state; except for maybe that Jalal was the author of the statement and was offended that he wasn’t consulted on the improvement. If you find it important to the body of the entry Jalal, so be it, I am not overly concerned with it and I will not re-edit it again.

But I still feel I’m right.