User talk:GoodOlAlbert

Hi
and welcome to Wikipedia. I've done a quick copyed on the Boat Show article, and added two tags. One says that the article is written like an advert - which it is. Get rid of things like 'stunning' or someone will call for deletion as spam. (No kidding - words like that set off the warning bells for the spam hunters here.) The other is refimprove - you need refs from outside the show. See WP:RS for more info. I've also put 'citation needed' against a statement which needs referencing or removal as it is largely opinion; this must be backed up reliably or it'll go. Over to you... Peridon (talk) 11:44, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Looking better - don't forget the refs... Peridon (talk) 15:17, 23 November 2010 (UTC)