User talk:Googoogoo165/Secessio plebis

Peer review complete. Tjna57 (talk) 02:06, 24 November 2020 (UTC)tjna57

Peer Review is complete and can be found at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Googoogoo165/Secessio_plebis/XAgememnonX_Peer_Review

Just a quick note, the additional information you added is helpful and provides a greater explanation of the article but the biggest weakness within this information is the reliance on Livy. Livy really isn't an up to date secondary source, arguably Livy is a primary source and therefor not adequate for Wikipedia. Additionally, if you could, finding more information on the fourth secession would strengthen this article more than working more on the sections you have already edited. — Preceding unsigned comment added by XAgememnonX (talk • contribs) 00:10, 2 December 2020 (UTC)