User talk:Gooutsideanddothings

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Peer-Review Kondoa Rock-Art Sites
Hello,

Here are a few suggestions I have for your article,

1. If possible, more information on the 'Mungomi wa Kolo (Kolo 1 site) could be given.

2. While I understand there is number of rock shelters, it may help to add several more that are deemed especially important.

3. Further mentions (if available) of any more paintings would benefit the article.

4. It seems you may be able to create another section concerning its purpose today, as I see that you briefly mentioned it in your introduction.

5. Landscape and geographical context could be separate from the introduction too.

6. I believe the correct capitilization for "The Paintings" should be "The paintings."

I am not familiar with the subject but I got a reasonable idea of it from your article. I personally suggest breaking down the introduction. Great work so far! Hitsujii (talk) 21:37, 7 November 2019 (UTC)