User talk:GordonHa1

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Hello, GordonHa1, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Dendritic Model moved to draftspace
This article needs some more work before it's ready. I've moved it to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption.

The main thing to address is the referencing. Please have a look at WP:Referencing for Beginners and check out how inline references are used. In brief, you need to provide structured source data (best in the form of a citation template) in tags, rather than manually insert numbers in brackets as you seem to have done. These tags are then collected by the software and turned into a reference list if the template is present at the end of the article.

Second, please take care to not make any statements that are not directly sourcable to some such reference. Remember that this is an encyclopedia article, not an essay; don't try to make an argument and draw conclusions, merely report what other sources have already said. In this regard, the "Issues" section should probably be removed entirely because it reads as if that is a summary made by you, not a cited source.

cheers -- Elmidae (talk · contribs) 10:03, 24 March 2018 (UTC)