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- How could we improve the page to ensure that this topic is

1) This article is an orphan, as no other articles link to it. Please introduce links to this page from related articles; try the Find link tool for suggestions.(March 2015)

How to link this page to other related articles? We have added See also part, while we also added links for the words that could link to its existing Wikipedia page.

2) The topic of this article may not meet Wikipedia's general notability guideline. (March 2015)

There are citations from various different sources, including numerous reputable new agencies, the RTHK website that broadcasted the TV series and other websites.

3) This article contains content that is written like an advertisement.(March 2015)

All of the contents are objective as they are gathered from secondary sources instead of other perceptions.

Please point out areas in the page that could not meet the 3 requirements, suggest some solutions for us to improve this page.

- Do you find the second paragraph of this part problematic?

"The demographic statistic of non-Chinese residents in Hong Kong, which shows the multicultural community in Hong Kong. Moreover, there is a very multicultural community in Hong Kong. Hong Kong has always been a place for immigrants, and it builds up its wealth from the contributions made collectively by the local residents and immigrants. Local residents would live harmoniously with foreign immigrants in numerous occasions. For instance, they would celebrate together at bars in Lan Kwai Fong during festive moments, whereas, foreign students are blended into local and international schools to study collectively with local students.[18] The new generation also welcome the integration of the foreign cultures, which have been imported to the local context by foreign residents. There are foreign cuisine restaurants that line up the localised “Little Thailand”[1] in Kowloon City and “Koreatown”[2] on Kimberley Road, and they are always packed with both local and foreign customers. All of these reflect the inclusiveness of HongKongers on the 451,000 non-Chinese residents in Hong Kong.[19]"

For the examples of multiculturalism are solely individual cases that could not reflect the general phenomenon of solidarity as in inclusiveness of foreign citizens in Hong Kong society.

What amendments could we make to improve these parts?

Gpa4444 (talk) 11:04, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Gpa444, you also asked this question on the Talk:Lion Rock Spirit page, so I'm going to close this request and ask that you check that page for feedback. Primefac (talk) 14:04, 23 March 2015 (UTC)

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