User talk:Gpol643/Gulabi Gang/Sefinkel Peer Review

Overall Impressions
Overall, I think the article is much improved and probably close to completion. I think the writer hits almost all important issues that a reader may need to be able to learn about the Gubali Gang. I can see that some additions will be made to the education section and I hope a couple governmental perspectives make it in to the article. However, I think that the writer does a great job at getting straight to the point and not making their writing seem biased-- the writing is very factual and informational. As I mentioned earlier, I think the article could be improved by adding the governmental views of the Gubali Gang and any conflicts that have arisen between the the gang and the government. The article is well-developed as it gives readers the information they need without being biased and include details specific to the gang that may not have been know otherwise. Additionally, the writer has developed the article by better organizing the information in a readable format. Sefinkel (talk) 21:44, 31 March 2023 (UTC)