User talk:Gqcwiki

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Hello, Gqcwiki, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Here are the answers that Ian sent you via email Your draft looks good. A few things that you could improve

- you used a page from the Dana-Farber Institute as a source about itself. You should try to find an independent source.

- you don't have a source for the fact that Farber Hall is named after him

- the personal life section is entirely unsourced

- your quote from Mukherjee is too long. The use of copyright material on Wikipedia needs to be kept to the bare minimum. You should not use quotes if you can convey the same information without quotations. Which you can in this case.

Ian

```` — Preceding unsigned comment added by RJBazell (talk • contribs) 20:16, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

You need references to the personal life section RJBazell (talk) 16:37, 8 April 2018 (UTC) And indeed be sure that all of the issues raised above by Ian are resolved RJBazell (talk) 16:38, 8 April 2018 (UTC)