User talk:Gr5469a/sandbox

Hey Gaby,

Great work on your Sandboxed article ! A few suggestions, try restructuring your article. By this I mean, don't open with the list it comes off wrong, you should introduce that visual literacy with a little background, then list which avenues it can help students in. A possible way you can do this is by sort of reversing the way your article is currently written. Maybe also discuss how Visual Literacy is being used in schools today, you can even reference the course we offer at AU. Great sources ! Good job! Also, check the way you introduce ideas, it sounds choppy. You could also add some visual media to this section of educators in a visual media environment.

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