User talk:Grace raper/sandbox

In-depth analysis, Grace. You bring up some important points about potential bias and veracity of sources. Interesting that this article has been assigned to lots of previous students.

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Hey Grace,

Wow what an article you have chosen.

Something that stood out to me was the mention of a Media Ecology Association. If you were to add a section on that particular organization and how it fits in either the American school or the European school of Media Ecology it would add a better understanding about the topic and those that are involved with the subject today.

I would remove the first sentence under the Metaphor sub-heading, as that statement has been made multiple times.

I would also use some new sources as I saw that many of the sources have come from a while back. I saw one source on Google Scholar that discussed Media Ecology and Elections, which would help to show the evolving of the topic.

Overall, I think that there is a pretty clear structure to the article and it flows well, and there are a variety of sources that helps to strengthen the piece altogether. The article also seems pretty neutral in that it provides information on what those involved with the topic are saying and it has what the critics are saying as well.

MichaelLopez92 (talk) 06:29, 21 April 2019 (UTC)