User talk:Gracelorelei/sandbox/londoncrime

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations What I caught (but otherwise good job): No apostrophe needed in "offenses" at the end of the second paragraph. With any year there does need to be an apostrophe after the numbers/before the "s" as in: 1690's.

Language
Meets Expectations Concise information that presents a lot of insight.

Organization
Exceeds Expectations This piece shows that you put a lot of consideration into the two sections you wrote, very well organized.

Coding
Meets Expectations Excellent use of coding with many helpful links.

Validity
Meets Expectations Your content is backed up with good statistics and sources.

Completion
Exceeds Expectations Well fleshed out, and in good time.

Relevance
Meets Expectations Points out some otherwise undetected and relevant topics in London's history of crime.

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations Some corrections: add "an" to "with increase of attacks around Pride Month". Under female crime, change city to cities. uncapitalize Prostitution after "Furthermore"

Language
Meets Expectations The language is good and in keeping with the article.

Organization
Meets Expectations Your work is well organized into two clear sections.

Coding
Exceeds Expectations Excellent use of coding with many helpful links.

Validity
Meets Expectations The information is valid to the topic.

Completion
Exceeds Expectations The assignment needs small tweaks in grammar, but otherwise is fully complete, and you have included a good picture to help the aesthetics of your addition. Well done.

Relevance
Meets Expectations The information is relevant to the city article.