User talk:Gracemajkut/G-Force (film)/Dmd458 Peer Review

Overall, I enjoyed the topic you chose. It appears that you haven't made any changes to the article yet, or started doing so in your sandbox. I would recommend starting by finding what information you want to add to this piece and then finding a reliable source that you can cite. I would then take the advice of those before me and shorten the plot section. There is no reason for it to be so long, it tells the entire movie. Try shortening it to just the need-to-know information of the plot that you cannot understand the movie without.

The content that is already there is clear and concise, besides the plot. I liked the inclusion of the actors/actresses and their roles in the movie. The way this was done was stylish and easy to read.

I believe it would be more beneficial to the ready if you also included pictures of the main actors and who they voiced/played.

Besides for that, I think you have a lot of wiggle room to add whatever relatable content you want to this article.