User talk:Gracemcguire17/article draft

1. I like the plot of the story. It has enough detail to where you get a basic understanding of it but also doesn't give you too many details that you may as well not read. It short and to the point which i think is good. There's no period at the end so I don't know if its finished or not but it looks pretty solid. 2. Maybe you can provide a small description of the characters. Just like who they are in regards to J Silver and the other characters. Of course, finishing up the Reception section would be good but I'm sure you're aware. 3. One thing you can do to improve the article is maybe adding more to the award section. Perhaps describe the significance of award or how that helped the story/made it known, etc. 4. One thing that could be applicable to my article is the conciseness of the article. Its straight factual and gets to the point. Daiisyy (talk) 03:58, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Sourcing
The draft is moving along, but you're going to need more sources. ProfHanley (talk) 18:10, 12 November 2019 (UTC)